Can You Please Review This Letter For Any Mistakes & Suggest Necessary Corrections?

08 Oct

Posted by Administrator in Quality Management

Dear Sir,
As I requested on phone, I am in need of an experience certificate for the purpose of enrolling for a Quality management course.
I would appreciate it very much if you could issue me an experience certificate outlining the following:
- my position
- a brief description of responsibilities
- the date I joined the company
Thank you in advance for your help.
Sincerely,

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Comment by Lola Add karma

error

2009-10-08 03:18:29

Try and be specific in who the “Sir” is. If you don’t know, put down “To whom it may concern.”
When you said, as requested by phone, go ahead and say what day you requested it. Say, “As I requested BY phone on January 12, 2009″ or give an approximate date.
Take out the “very much” in the I would appreciate line.
Very good letter.
That’s all I could suggest.